Script consultations
Stuck in your feature film script? Hard to see the forest for the trees?
Choose from three tiers of professional script feedback:
Forest
Forest package includes:
1–2 pages of high-level feedback on what’s working and what could be improved, focusing on story, structure, plot, characters, and dialogue.
Trees
Trees package includes:
1–2 pages of high-level feedback on what’s working and what could be improved
1–2 pages of detailed notes on story, structure, plot, character, and dialogue.
Leaves
Leaves package includes:
1–2 pages of high-level feedback on what’s working and what could be improved
1–2 pages of detailed notes on story, structure, plot, character, and dialogue.
In-line edits and comments throughout the script
30-minute call to discuss feedback and script
Testimonials
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Testimonials 〰️
“Erin's feedback was extremely helpful. She had ideas for everything from individual word choices to broader story issues. It felt like she was personally invested not only in the story and the characters, but in the success of the script itself. Because of her work on it, it's in a much stronger place.”
—Adam (screenwriter)
“Erin’s feedback made a tremendous difference for my book. Over and over she helped me find the words I needed, the hardest ones that seemed just beyond my grasp. She was amazing to work with! Each step of the way, she was professional and quick to respond. Throughout she seemed to intuitively understand my writing goals and know exactly the feedback that would help me achieve them.”
—Elizabeth (creative nonfiction author and poet)